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Here's a tough one.    Just reworded prompt.

19491:  Reword second paragraph of the install script introduction to
make it less confusing

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/perforce/FB-DELOREAN/nfx-tree/Tools/cw_install.in =3D=3D=3D=3D
579,583c579,583
< echo "Would you like to run interactive or unattended?  Answer 'yes'"
< echo "to run in interactive mode.  You will be prompted prior to any"
< echo "reboots of the system. Otherwise you will only be prompted for"
< echo "the FTP URL of the distribution file.  The default should work"
< echo "for most cases."
---
> echo "You may run this program in interactive mode or unattended
mode."
> echo "If you choose interactive mode, you will be prompted prior to"
> echo "any reboots of the system.  Otherwise, you will only be
prompted"
> echo "for the FTP URL of the distribution file, and the upgrade will
be"
> echo "completed automatically."
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LANG=3D"en-us"></SPAN><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"> <FONT SIZE=3D2 =
FACE=3D"Arial">Reword second paragraph of the install script =
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should work&quot;</FONT></SPAN></P>

<P ALIGN=3DLEFT><SPAN LANG=3D"en-us"><FONT SIZE=3D2 FACE=3D"Arial">&lt; =
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